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		<title>By: Tamara</title>
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		<author>Tamara</author>
		<pubDate>Mon, 17 Apr 2006 04:36:05 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>of course, it was not easy, and I would appreciate input on the translation, esp. on the "ambushed by a grimbeard nation" (I've got no clear idea what a хмырь is, actually) and the "polish up the marble forehead" 

And, oops, I forgot the verse that comes between "and yet out no one came" and "With hairy eyes their deeds they sew": it is

There, where by light stands darkness,
Where light by dark forever stands,
From Gospel to Councils wander
Minds strange to understand. 

If you want to put an update on the post with the full translation, in the correct order and with any corrections, credited to me...</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>of course, it was not easy, and I would appreciate input on the translation, esp. on the &#8220;ambushed by a grimbeard nation&#8221; (I&#8217;ve got no clear idea what a хмырь is, actually) and the &#8220;polish up the marble forehead&#8221; </p>
<p>And, oops, I forgot the verse that comes between &#8220;and yet out no one came&#8221; and &#8220;With hairy eyes their deeds they sew&#8221;: it is</p>
<p>There, where by light stands darkness,<br />
Where light by dark forever stands,<br />
From Gospel to Councils wander<br />
Minds strange to understand. </p>
<p>If you want to put an update on the post with the full translation, in the correct order and with any corrections, credited to me&#8230;</p>
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		<title>By: Tamara</title>
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		<author>Tamara</author>
		<pubDate>Mon, 17 Apr 2006 04:26:15 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Here you are, roughly:

Where till dawn stands darkness raven, 
Order sheets from prison sent
Are obeyed by minds unshaven 
In unfaith, like testament.

Time upon their backs they carry
Pour it for weighing at each pass,
Polish up the marble forehead, [?]
And feed the Spassky hourglass.

Beneath icons they moan by day,
By night they howl at the sky,
Always sit in another's sleigh,
And head to doctors by and by.

How many heads by now 've been offed,
Not a single one sewn back.
They sing of grandparents' profit,
While they trudge the bottom's track.

Save themselves for the first dying;
Before the second come the wakes.
All saints the devils are crucifying:
God, it seems, his rest day takes.

All's wrong-coloured, all's frustration,
All the light one could see, and no light here.
Ambushed by a grimbeard nation,
And tortured many a year.

They seek with fire by daylight clear
A way to a world where it's not the same.
There's many holes out, they all hear,
And yet out no one came.

There, where by light stands darkness,
Where light by dark forever stands,
From Gospel to Councils wander
Minds strange to understand.

With hairy eyes their deeds they sew,
Hammer out children forge-defined.
They hitch sleds for summer's snow,
And resemble human kind.

Hey you, cough to me, louse living,
Softly sing beneath moon's rest,
Of how, in happy drunk oblivion
I slept on a stable's breast.

And I dreamed of other years:
A world with neither fools nor war,
Where maids nude and slim appear,
Where men sober-minded are,

Where a drunken angel winging
Brought us news of joy and mirth...
All of us, on our beds singing,
Build a heaven upon Earth.

(c) 2006 Tamara Vardomskaya</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Here you are, roughly:</p>
<p>Where till dawn stands darkness raven,<br />
Order sheets from prison sent<br />
Are obeyed by minds unshaven<br />
In unfaith, like testament.</p>
<p>Time upon their backs they carry<br />
Pour it for weighing at each pass,<br />
Polish up the marble forehead, [?]<br />
And feed the Spassky hourglass.</p>
<p>Beneath icons they moan by day,<br />
By night they howl at the sky,<br />
Always sit in another&#8217;s sleigh,<br />
And head to doctors by and by.</p>
<p>How many heads by now &#8216;ve been offed,<br />
Not a single one sewn back.<br />
They sing of grandparents&#8217; profit,<br />
While they trudge the bottom&#8217;s track.</p>
<p>Save themselves for the first dying;<br />
Before the second come the wakes.<br />
All saints the devils are crucifying:<br />
God, it seems, his rest day takes.</p>
<p>All&#8217;s wrong-coloured, all&#8217;s frustration,<br />
All the light one could see, and no light here.<br />
Ambushed by a grimbeard nation,<br />
And tortured many a year.</p>
<p>They seek with fire by daylight clear<br />
A way to a world where it&#8217;s not the same.<br />
There&#8217;s many holes out, they all hear,<br />
And yet out no one came.</p>
<p>There, where by light stands darkness,<br />
Where light by dark forever stands,<br />
From Gospel to Councils wander<br />
Minds strange to understand.</p>
<p>With hairy eyes their deeds they sew,<br />
Hammer out children forge-defined.<br />
They hitch sleds for summer&#8217;s snow,<br />
And resemble human kind.</p>
<p>Hey you, cough to me, louse living,<br />
Softly sing beneath moon&#8217;s rest,<br />
Of how, in happy drunk oblivion<br />
I slept on a stable&#8217;s breast.</p>
<p>And I dreamed of other years:<br />
A world with neither fools nor war,<br />
Where maids nude and slim appear,<br />
Where men sober-minded are,</p>
<p>Where a drunken angel winging<br />
Brought us news of joy and mirth&#8230;<br />
All of us, on our beds singing,<br />
Build a heaven upon Earth.</p>
<p>(c) 2006 Tamara Vardomskaya</p>
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